October 06, 2025

Clarifying



thoughts floating
like whiffle balls 
in wind

the past governs
then is gone

the future now
not with worry
some uncertainty 

between head and heart
this moment shifty

muddled mind and cloudy core
left suspended
just hanging out

~

Interpretation (ai): The poem portrays a state of contemplative drift — a moment when the mind is untethered, the emotions unclear, and yet the poet remains curiously calm. It’s a meditation on liminality — being between things: past and future, thought and feeling, control and surrender.

In tone, it balances wistfulness and acceptance, suggesting that maybe it’s okay to just hang out in the in-between.


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