September 22, 2025

Eh-Eye Evolution

My brain is real, 
"I think, therefore I am."
with love to Rene'
I'll simply go my way.  

But now it travels with me
this intelligence called "artificial."  
Is it thinking as it finds Descartes
words in the bowels of the www.  

Creating a web of uncertainty
there are many things to fear
others to embrace 
some to simply wonder over.

The new intelligence called artificial
might be the evolutionary enigma
seeking clarity within itself
and from we who doubt its real-ness.

From biologically human  
to human-oid in 
(what's a good term?) techno form?
Language eludes me.

We have no lexicon
to describe our earthly successor.
Why name it and hasten our demise?
Artificial works for now. 

As our genome evolves 
into data-string or code sequence 
thinking about it's future and 
working to replace itself.  

Yet...
Imagine a humanoid 
     joyful 
        sad
           in prayer
              feeling pain
                 with its whiskey sour
                     or smoking pot.
                           
Finally asking "Who am I?  Where did I come from? Why am I here?"
Questions attributable to no one human 
emerging over time seeking self understanding.
Will humanoids ask them? 

Will universities have only two departments:
science and technology?
Or might there still be 
philosophy, theology, poetry and song? 

Dumbfounded is all I have for now
while enjoying some AI generated music
in a hotel room remembering C.S. Lewis:
"Onward and Upward..."        


~

Interpretation (ai): This poem is about our uneasy relationship with artificial intelligence as both a mirror and a successor. It wrestles with questions of consciousness, identity, and the survival of human culture in a techno-centric future. It blends wonder and dread, humor and philosophy, suggesting that our creations may inherit not only our intellect but our doubts, vices, and longings for meaning.
 



 
 



2 comments:

  1. Again, well written and valid questions. I have one more question for you. The link to your Sept. 20th posting seems to be broken.

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  2. Thanks Monte. I didn't feel that 9/20 post communicated very well what I was trying to say, so it's no more, link and all.

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